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Birth of a Boat
On Fri, 09 Mar 2007 10:35:06 -0500, Harry Krause
wrote: Perhaps you ought to read some Hemingway. Almost everything you post is overwritten or overwrought or both. Write shorter sentences. Write shorter paragraphs. Edit out the fluff. Everybody's a critic. :) |
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Birth of a Boat
Short Wave Sportfishing wrote:
On Fri, 09 Mar 2007 10:35:06 -0500, Harry Krause wrote: Perhaps you ought to read some Hemingway. Almost everything you post is overwritten or overwrought or both. Write shorter sentences. Write shorter paragraphs. Edit out the fluff. Everybody's a critic. :) Purple prose is painful. |
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Birth of a Boat
On Fri, 09 Mar 2007 11:10:48 -0500, Harry Krause
wrote: Short Wave Sportfishing wrote: On Fri, 09 Mar 2007 10:35:06 -0500, Harry Krause wrote: Perhaps you ought to read some Hemingway. Almost everything you post is overwritten or overwrought or both. Write shorter sentences. Write shorter paragraphs. Edit out the fluff. Everybody's a critic. :) Purple prose is painful. Purple is painful. :) |
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Birth of a Boat
On Fri, 09 Mar 2007 11:10:48 -0500, Harry Krause
wrote: Purple prose is painful. Whining whiners are whimpy... |
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