Short Wave Sportfishing wrote:


I'd like to see what the First Place photo was - you did a nice job
tweaking that image. The gray scaling is brilliant - you have a nice
feel for graduation and impression.

I will post a copy of the first place photo when it is sent out via email.

No offense, I still think you've done better work though - in
particular with your initial portraits.

I actually prefer portraits and candid street photos.


You can see what he's talking about by comparing the two images. The
gorilla is interacting with something on camera - the girl is
interacting with something off camera.

The second problem with the penguin image is that there are two
subjects - the girl and the penguin. There is nothing to link the two
together - zip, nada.

He's dead on with that critique.

Which is why I love the critique from the pros. They are not a member
of the club, so they can feel free to give their honest impression. I
think I learn something on all photos critiqued, wither i took them or not.
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