On Fri, 09 Mar 2007 11:07:07 -0500, Harry Krause
wrote:


I didn't suggest your writing was like Hemingway's, or that it should
be. I suggested you read some of his writings so that you might learn a
bit about saying more with less. He was the master of that.

Hills Like White Elephants - almost all dialogue.
Unfortunately, Elephants can't plane.

--Vic