On Fri, 09 Mar 2007 10:35:06 -0500, Harry Krause
wrote:



Perhaps you ought to read some Hemingway. Almost everything you post is
overwritten or overwrought or both. Write shorter sentences. Write
shorter paragraphs. Edit out the fluff.

Yeah, yeah. Leave out all technical info, and talk about the
iridescence of the night time sea. Take it to arts.poetry.
Chucks's stuff is fine.
Besides, I remember a nicely rendered vision of ice glazed harbor from
Chuck. Very nice, in fact.

--Vic