On Fri, 09 Mar 2007 11:10:48 -0500, Harry Krause
wrote:

Short Wave Sportfishing wrote:
On Fri, 09 Mar 2007 10:35:06 -0500, Harry Krause
wrote:

Perhaps you ought to read some Hemingway. Almost everything you post is
overwritten or overwrought or both. Write shorter sentences. Write
shorter paragraphs. Edit out the fluff.

Everybody's a critic. :)

Purple prose is painful.

Purple is painful. :)